Showing posts with label Writting. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writting. Show all posts
Friday, 10 June 2016
Angel Avengers Assemble
Boom!Paw! You know what is. Super girl was kicking and puching like it was noting but there was someone invisble that invisble thing was seepling as super girl first kicked that invisble thing it woke up and it was a big black panther super girl as soon as super girl saw that big black panther she was runing while she was ruing she was very sacerd as she was ruing she jumped on to a big building where the panther could not get her when the panther was thinking how to get her he had saw a way to get her as soon as he saw that way he went and super girl was jumping onto other building when bat man saw the big black panther bat man went jumping onto building and when bat man got to super girl when super girl saw bat man super girl thought that it was the big black pather. When the panther was runing after super girl bat man stoped and uper cuted the big black panthen then when the panther saw that uper cute he went flying in the air and droped into a building when bat man did that he went to go see were super girl was and super girl was at wonder womans cafe super girl was so exhusted and when super girl got to wonder womans cafe when she first steped into the door she had fainted and when wonder womann saw her on the fall she picked her up and took her to the car and she rushed to the hospitly when they got there they put super girl onto a bed and took her tumpetor and 1 hour later it was the end of her life wonder woman was crying and she called bat man and told him that super girl had passed he was so mad at the panthen so bat man and wonder woman went to go and turn the panther into a person and then killed the panther.THE END.
Thursday, 26 May 2016
Will He Save Her!
Boom pow kapow. As you know The story goes like this there was a super hero called flash and and there was to orther super hero there names were wonder woman and super girl.
One night there was a girl called mary jane she was at work and flash was down the road watching her she was working then she had finshed work and then when she finshed work She had to clean up the hole cafe after that she had went to her car and went to the city. Flash was watching her go evry where then at.
9.02 she had got to the city and went to go and vist another cafe that she like’s when she went in she went to go and grab her a cup of coffe when she grab her that she went up staris and sat on top of the building then as soon as flash saw the joyker go to her flash saw him push her of the building and as soon as she fall flash jumped of anothere building that was close to her and to went down fasted and flash cloud’nt belive that he cort her mary jane was so sacerd that she was gonna die.1
Tuesday, 16 February 2016
Monday, 15 February 2016
Duffy Theatre
DUFFY THEATRE
Write a paragraph (which will then go onto your blog), describing the experience of attending 'Duffy Theatre' on Tuesday afternoon.
-WALT: use punctuation accurately
-Think carefully about how we should use our punctuation.
-What were your thoughts about it when we left the hall?
-What did you learn?
-How did you feel?
START WRITING HERE:
On tuesday the 9th of feb at ptengland school it was the duffy theatre for the year 5 to year 8 students. There name’s for there charater were ruby duff and all the orther charater’s in the story.
At the Duffy theatre I had lots and lots of fun”because there was a young little girl named ruby that didn’t know how to read she just keeped on watching cricket game’s on her t.v. she was to lazy to read a book.
Her father got send to the army and left ruby and never took her to school’ so then she didn't know how to read but then duffy boy came and saved ruby's father from dying in the army so duffy boy traveled back to 2016 to check if ruby's dad is alive.
What i learnt at the duff theatre was how ruby’s dad went to war and how duff went to go save ruby’s dad then duffy was a ninja in 2019 the duufy Theatre was so so funny.
Monday, 30 November 2015
Angel Athletics
Last Friday I woke up and I knew it Athletics Day so I grabbed my red clothes. I am in Hikianalia
At school we had to get into our t shirts and shorts to show our house colour.The first thing we did was sprinting. I was in the first line I was running so hard that I came second.Then the second line went and the lines keep going. When all the lines were finished we did the finals. When I went I was so nervous inside I just couldn't wait I said in my head. BANG there it went, I was going so fast but then ‘Oh no why’ I said . I lost but I did I didn't come last.
After a while we changed to shot put . When we got there I really wanted to come first, second or third. We went to sit down and a teacher told us the instructions. What she said is if you think that you know how to play shot put please go with the boys. If you think you need more help stay where you are . We went into a line The first person 2,3,4 went then it came to me .I tried so hard but I just wasn't quite there yet.
I really enjoyed athletics day but it was hard. What I enjoyed the most was having a sack bag race. I think you should join hikianalia house because we work so hard.
Thursday, 15 October 2015
Holiday Highlight
On Saturday the 10th it was my brother’s birthday me my sister’s and brother’s and my mum then we went to the birthday boy's house his name is ayden i was excited to go my brother turned 18 they had fun.After that we had to get the food done then we had to put the food and the cake on the table then we had to give him prizes then we sing happy birthday to him then my sister went up and said something’s. Then we eat we had meat and sausages salad and Roy fish then i went to get a drink and cookies it was so fun after that we had a ice cream then we had a cake the cake was so yummy them me and my sister went to go and play outside with my brother’s we went to go and play on the bike’s then i went to go grab another drink.
Then my sister went to go and play on the bike them after she was playing on the bike we went to go play with my brother’s then they did not want to play with us so we went to go and play on my sister phone after that me and my sister went to my brother to ask if we can have one more cake and he said go and grab one.
when we said happy birthday and when we had a cake and some ice cream it was so fun.
when we said happy birthday and when we had a cake and some ice cream it was so fun.
Thursday, 24 September 2015
Smart Email's
This week we are learning about smart email's and also cyber smart smart email's are all about being formal or informal and formal is being nice informal is being mean
Smart Email's
This week we are learning about smart email's and also cyber smart smart email's are all about being formal or informal and formal is being nice informal is being mean
Tuesday, 22 September 2015
Thursday, 17 September 2015
The Crocodile
one day a man went fishing in his boat so he, put out his fishing rod and threw it out in the sea, but something was biting it he felt terrifying until he saw a shadow in the water and out jumped a gigantic crocodile and banging, and slapping his tail on the boat and the boat was breaking into pieces.
The Bull Chase
One day a man was walking around town, When he was walking he saw a wild bull surrounded by a strong fence. The lock broke and the bull ran towards the man, He was terrified, the bull was about to attack him so he was trying to escape but there was no place to run, so the bull ran and there was dust and the man couldn’t see the bull bursted in the air and the man sprinted in the water swimming as fast as he could. The bull couldn’t swim that fast so the bull went back on land and the man ran off shocked.
Wednesday, 16 September 2015
Angel Writing Rubric
once we had cross country on the 7th of september it was one of the most hardest things that i've ever done also cross country is when our school runs far far away and back to get fit and we were really tired. We started at 1.00 o'clock also when we were spectating we sore everybody trying there best at cross country.
Also when we started when Mr burt smashed the wood together I needed time to think then once he smashed it together when we started I was using all my energy it was really hard but I made it and I was really tired and I didn't believe it was hard. Than I thought.
When we started it wasn't like last year it was more difficult than I fort it was one of hardest things i've done also i felt very tired through nearly all of it and half way i had a stitch and i was really sore like i was bitten by a spider sore. also once I went to the finish line I felt happy.That it was over and I had a nice drink of water it was refreshing.
and what came I came 2nd to last at least I wasn't last and one of my friends came first and most of friends came different places like 2nd 3rd 4th 5th 6th and other places and it was good that I wasn't last also when the year 5s and me ran and it was really difficult. Also I was running as fast as I could and I beat two people on the run. Also lots of people waged it and they said excuses like I will die from it cross country Also cross country is the best in The world
Wednesday, 2 September 2015
Monday, 10 August 2015
The Terrifying Escape
The Terrifying Escape
one day on a nice summer day. i was flying my big giant plane to africa to give some food to some of the people that were very poor. and then some of the african people got in front of my plane i couldn't stop the plane because the engine was broken i tried to stop but it wouldn't stop. so i nearly ran of the African people over but luckily i do not crush all of them over.
if i was one of them i will start running until the plane stops. if i was in the plane i will laugh. i will be running really fast and then i will give up and just keep on running to where the plane is not going.if i was still in the plane i will tell the pilot to stop then it will stop.
What would you feel like if you were in that situation.
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Wednesday, 5 August 2015
Tuesday, 16 June 2015
Descriptive Writing
Today I learnt about Adjectives. I had to describe where I was. I gave clues of where I was.
I was at the netball courts
Monday, 23 February 2015
The Pt England Way, Wits
Use your wits means. W-walk away.T-talk about it, S-seek help, I-ignore, use you wits can help you stay away from the person the was been mean to you.
walk away means walk away from the person. and tell him or her to stop been mean.
ignore means ignore the person that was been mean to you and tell the teacher if he’s been mean to you.
seek help means help the person next to you and tell the person to stay away from you.
You should use your WITS because it takes you far in your life, and it makes you stay out of trouble.

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