And the people names are called Putauaki and Maungarei there were one woman and one men they were going to have a battle in the dark forest because Maungarei wanted Putauaki to go away from this country but Putauaki did not want to go away from this country because it was his home Putauaki did not want to fight to.
But Maungarei wanted to have a battle with her because she did not want to fight and she did not want to lose her country so the thing she had to do was she had to fight from her country so she will not lose her country.
So the battle happen at 12:00 Maungarei and Putauaki were there and they had a talk first and had the fight it was in new zealand and that were there were fighting on the top of Maungarei hill and Putauaki hill they were fight on there hill because that's where they were safe and will get there power from.
Then when there were having a fight happen at 12:00 there was a big rain cloud and lots of rain came down to the grown when there were there fight Maungarei found some way how to stop this fight because putauaki wanted to not fight but if putauaki did not fight Maungarei will get his place.
Then Maungarei had something in his head he had idea and it was that he wanted to have a little talk to Putauaki to see if he wanted to have a little talk and see if they can work something out so Maungarei said if you want your place you can have it and then he said yes i will have my place and keep it nice.
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