Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Monday, 24 September 2018

Pourquoi tale

         How ladybug’s get there black spot’s?

How do ladybug’s get black spots on there back?You might ask why.
There was once a butterfly who lived in a tree in a dark green forest, sitting on a leaf whose wings were orange.Looking down at those wild animals wondering what it will be like to be so big..I see a llitte red ladybug wonder what kind of one maybe one with no spots or one with spots who knows.

Many years ago there were wild animals living in a dangerous dark green forest with butterflys and ladybugs..there were strange things happening to these wild animals you could hear them crying out loud cause they must of hurt themself or they can’t find any food..I see a ladybug it might be heading towards me I wonder what it’s gonna do once it gets to me hope it’s gonna be a good conversation i must help this ladybug it hasn’t been in this dark green forest to long this is my first time seeing this ladybug.

Hey butterfly how you doing I come to get some good advice from you it’s about my spots.I have no spots on my back i’m wondering where I could get my spots..Butterfly said I could tell you where the place is but i can’t come cause i have other things to do and it will take you day’s for you to get to the place.Thank you butterfly that was some good advice once I get back I can tell you how it went with my spots.

Off I go on my Journey to where I have to go.He had stopped at his first destination which was in the woods he had stopped by and asked if he could get spots on his back but they said no we don’t have little bugs like you we only have big animals that could kill you and then give you spots.while never mind i will carry on walking thank you for your advice.

My legs are hurting i’m gonna stop here and ask wait let me just rest my legs there hurting me so bad….Hey there how’s your day going i’m just wondering where do you get black spots..Ohh Just walk straight then turn right on the first street then you will see a sign that say’s black spots.Thank you sir while OMG I can see the sign there it is He had looked into the store..Knock knock can I come in.Yeah sure.Hey is this the place to get black spots.Yeahh...i’ve been searching everywhere for a place to fine black spots..It must of been hard for you.Yupp it was.


Are you able to put 4 black spots on me i’m the only ladybug in a dark green forest that has no spots I feel weird cause I see other ladybugs that have spots and I have nothing I am begging you..Yeahh sure come with me and i’ll put some on..OMG I’m getting spots I can’t wait to look at myself..2 hours later.I look so pretty with these spots thank you very much It took me days and weeks for me to look for a place like this I can’t wait to go back home and show all the other ladybugs Here I go back Home.I feel so happy now I just like them there so beautiful.

Yeahh I’m home now Heyy guy’s how do I look don’t I look like you’s I am so happy to tell you’s this..it was so hard for me to find the place but at least I got spots..Butterfly where are you look at me don’t I look diffirent..Yeahh You are now apart of our family your nice and clean and got nice spots.While that’s what you have to do to get black spots you have to travel and tell people your question and they would help you,

Statement

              Being famous and/or rich would make me happy


People say that money is not everything. That we should think about our health, family and so on. As far as I’m concerned I agree with this. But what would we do if we didn’t  have money? Would we be happy? I don’t think so. People like Money and they want to spend them without limitations. Sometimes I dream what I would do if I were rich.

First of all if I had a lot of money, I would set off on a journey. I would visit places that I can only dream about. I would spend summer in The cook-islands; Go visit all fifteen islands and go see my relatives.
I would also buy a big house with a swimming-pool, car and many, many clothes,Also shoes I would also spend much money for things that i need to pay off.

I also wouldn’t forget about the people that are in need. I’m sure that a lot of money I would give for a charity organisations. I would donate some of my money to starveling children of Africa. I would also try to enable homeless people to get some jobs and buy flats.

In my opinion to be rich is very difficult because we don’t know who our true friend is and who likes us because of our fortune. I don’t think that money is the most important thing in our life, but sometimes it causes that life is simpler and easier. Thanks to the money our dreams could come true.

I don’t think that I will even be enormously rich. But if I were, I would never fulfill all of my wishes because the richer you are, the more you need.

The bear and the travellers

                       The bear and the travellers 


Two travellers were on a long journey through the countryside. They were walking along a track on the edge of some wood, when, some way ahead of them, they suddenly spotted a great big bear ambling towards them.they weren’t sure if the bear saw them,they didn’t want to risk it.

So the first traveller climbed up the nearest tree and headed towards the top of it and the other traveller just stood there looking scared..the traveller was screaming loud because he didn’t know how to climb a tree and he was screaming at the first traveller to help him get up cause the bear heard him screaming his lungs off. Look it just went back into the bush ohhhh no it jumped back out

The traveller at the bottom said he’s unable to fight the savage beast alone, so he threw himself on the ground and layed still, as if he was dead. He had heard that a Bear will not touch a dead body.It must have been true, for the Bear snuffed at the Man’s head awhile, and then, seeming to be satisfied that he was dead, walked away. The Man in the tree climbed down.and said it looked like he said something to you what did he say.”He said don’t trust a friend deserts you in time of trouble.

 


Monday, 20 August 2018

Benefits of exercise Lyrics

This is a song I have remade from Taylor Swift. The song is called Shake It Off and I really hope you enjoy my new song. This song is based on how we can all stay healthy and fit for the future and yeah just enjoy.

I stay out too late, got nothin' in my brain

That's what people say, mmm hmm, that's what people say, mmm hmm

I go on too many dates, but I can't make 'em stay

At least that's what people say mmm mmm, that's what people say mmm mmm

But I keep cruising, can't stop, won't stop moving

It's like I got this music in my mind, sayin' gonna be alright

'Cause the players gonna play, play, play, play, play

And the haters gonna hate, hate, hate, hate, hate

Baby, I'm just gonna shake, shake, shake, shake, shake



stayed up too late..I did no exercise.

That’s what my teacher say’s,mmm hmm,that’s what my teacher say’s,mmm hmm.

He said to exercise so it can help your health and mind.

At least that’s what agility says mmm mmm,That’s what agility says mmm mm

But I keep eating, can’t stop won’t stop eating.

it’s like I got the addiction,Sayin it’s gonna be alright.

Cause your muscels gonna hate,hate,hate.hate.hate

And your bones gonna,play,play,play,play,play

Cause i’m just gonna,shake,shake,shake,shake,shake

Monday, 6 August 2018

Benefits of physical activity


Physical activity! What is physical activity?physical activity is known as exercise and fitness and more..But what does physical activity do to help.

One thing physical activity can help you with is your health and more. It can reduce your risk and health conditions..it includes walking swimming and housework there are many more things it can help you with.

Another thing is aerobic activity makes you breathe harder and your heart beat faster as a result increases heart and lung fitness.Aerobics is a physical fitness helps you with your heart rate and more it also sustain exercise like jogging,swimming,sports.it strengthens the heart and lungs by improving your body.

Physical activity strengthens bones.Your bones is like muscles it gets better and stronger ever time you exercise and keep your body health.Also bones respond by getting stronger.exercise increases bone density.

So there we have it benefits of physical activity.so now you know how physical activity can help you with your body and health.





Thursday, 7 June 2018

Recount

That time of the week had come year 8’s week 4 our time to show leadership at kauaeranga christian camp.Every year students at pt england school that are year 8’s they go on a leadership camp to go and enjoy activities and leadership opportunities.We are heading of to kauaeranga valley christian camp.

The camp had activities they would usually have at a camp but this camp had activities you wouldn’t expect….Paintballing,Go karts.and more camps I go to don’t have these activities Paintballing and Go karts.Have you ever done paintballing before?I haven’t while since I haven’t I will like to give it a go when it’s my teams turn…

Last rotation my time had come to go and try out Paintballing i’m very nervous about it.We had to put on a pair of goggles to protect our eyes.The camp didn’t have guns that you will usually have at paintball Instead of guns we had slingshots….We started of with a nice and easy game it was capture the flag in my team was napa fetuao and david we were called the silly team….Once i saw the other team shooting I saw one coming for me and it hit my chest it was so saw that i got a bruise once i got that bruise I said to myself I should ask david or napa to protect me so that I don’t get hit again I was so scared from then…

Yeahh it was finally coming to the end of paintball we played the game were one person runs from the tree to the other side and everyone can shoot I was the second one to do it I felt scared because I had no one to protect me but that was okay...We were starting the game I ran across and my whole team was shooting at me once they shot SWISH! The first paintball went past my head then the second one went BANG! Straight onto my face I said Owww screaming so loud some of the paintball even went into my mouth I was like eww Yuck it tasted like mud with it I said weoww I failed.

It came to the end of the day were the year 8’s go into the lounge and have their meetings.Our theme for this year was O le alaia e lepule o tautua,It means show leadership through service.What this meant to me was to show leadership as a leader and also serving others I stepped out of my naughtiness and stepped up as a team leader.If i did something naughty one or two of my team memebers would have copyed me and that would of been showing no leadership as a leader to them.

Monday, 21 May 2018

Narrative


Title:Super Vivor

One early morning everyone meet at Ptengland school to decide what there going to do it for one whole day.This is a Competition to see who will win and see who will keep up with the activities If one of them give up then they will be sent home.

The first activity will be based in team 5 block their will be three tables set up for all three of them so every one behind there tables.On the tables are stink toe jam shoes with stink socks in it they have to try and untie the knot’s.Also baby clothes they have to try and clean it with their hands and water.The challenge may begin you’s only have 90 seconds captain america and spider man are struggling to untie the knot’s because the shoe stinks Mum and baby got the shoes untied now there on to cleaning the baby clothes captain america and spider-man are still struggling mum and baby are almost finish now spider man are on to cleaning the clothes mum and baby are finish and times up so that looked like a hard challenge to spider-man and captain america well i thought captain america was going to win but no he couldn’t handle the smell of the shoes well next time.So the winner for the whole show is Mum and baby well Mum and baby did some hard work together they both handled the smell of the shoes and handled clean the baby clothes.


The problem in this story is that spider man and captain america couldn’t handle the smell of the shoes and the socks in it  and Mum and baby could also they were struggling to untie the knot’s but it was hard for them to even try.

Free write

      Travelling around the world.

Make the most of it:You’re about to embark upon a journey that will be life changing.Let it.Meet new people, do things you didn’t see yourself doing,And learn from it.This may be your one opportunity.


Think safely:Going around the world can be as dangerous as you let it be.Take the appropriate precautions to avoid being taken advantage of.
Thinking safely is a very important thing it will only be important if you are going to travel by yourself.The reason why it is important is because the country your going could have very dangerous people there so you have to at least have someone with you.

Keep In touch with your family:For safety purposes, every few days find an Internet cafe and email your parents or friends, so they know where you are in case of an emergency.
It's not difficult to get a cheap phone if you're staying in an area for a reasonably significant amount of time. It may be as simple as switching out your sim card.
Only bring your computer if you're working or otherwise truly need it. Otherwise it will be cumbersome and you'll just worry about it being stolen.







Monday, 11 December 2017

Mr Patterson & Raenan

Mr Patterson came into team five and he had brang a guest with him which was a old yr8 at ptengland school that is now in yr12 at Tamaki collage. He had came to tell us to be aware of opportunities in collage. My most Impacting thing that Raenan said was when we get to collage just work hard and don't listen to what other people say because they are liars.

What Inspired me the most was when Raenan had talked about goals. Once you set a goal and achieve them you never know when your goal has became true. when Raenan had set a goal it had became true he was really happy to become head boy of Tamaki collage he had set that goal for 4 years and through out those 4 years he had been working hard to become a head boy.

So whatever collage you go to just appreciate what collage your parents had put you in and remember take advantage of the opportunities.

Wednesday, 15 November 2017

The Ugly Duckling

                 The Ugly Duckling
In a little town all the way down in the south island. There was a mother duck and a big ugly duckling sleeping on the side of a river waiting for mother duck's eggs to hatch.


It was a beautiful sunny day. Mother duck was sitting down for the whole day pondering about her egg’s. Woww!!! One of my eggs just hatched they're all hatching one by one mother duck sit’s on the big egg at last it open’s the ugly grey duckling.


One day, mother duck took her duckling’s to the river. The big ugly duckling told mother duck very discreetly that you have to be back before lunch because you need to feed them they will get hungry.


Two days later mother duck took her duckling’s to the farm yard The farmyard is very noisy. Their is a poor duckling that is unhappy there. The hen’s nip at him, The rooster’s flies at him,The duck’s pick at him,The farmer kick’s him.


One night he escaped from the farm yard. He comes to the river discreetly. He see’s many pretty birds swimming there. Their feathers are so white, their necks so long, their wings so pretty. The little duckling’s look at him and he really want’s to meet them so he can be a pretty duckling like them too.


Now it’s winter It’s white and snowy around the river. The river is covered with ice and the ugly duckling is very cold and unhappy. The baby duckling are unhappy because they are shivering and they have nowhere to swim.


Yeah!! Final spring comes the sun shines warmly everything is fresh and green the ugly duckling and the baby ducklings are happy they went to go to the river to swim because there is no ice covered over they were very happy.

                                         The End

These are the five word's we had use in our writing to make it more interesting for the reader
Coincidence, observed, blurted, discreetly and ponder.

The word's that are highlighted they are one of the five word's we had to use in our writing.

Tuesday, 17 October 2017

How to be a good role model

How Role Models help us.

They are helping to guide us through life during our development. And also to make important decisions that affects the outcome of our lives.

One way to be a good role model is to respect your elders by paying attention to what they say. When other kids see you doing it they will copy you. Also Role Models help us to make a change in our lives they help us with our problems and more. And if they see you doing something wrong they will stop you and ask you what you are doing.

Another way to be a good role model is to treat people the way you want to be treated. Instead of doing whatever you want think about others the way you want to be thought of. When you get treated the right way treat everybody else the right way don’t treat them in a bad way they won’t look up to you as a role model.

Another way to be a good role model is to Communicate with everyone
When you communicate with everyone don’t try to get the last word in when they are speaking. When you communicate with them they won’t be scared to communicate with you or others.

These are my three Ideas about how to be a good role model. If you need some ideas here they are. Respect your elders, Communicate, with everyone, Treat people the way you want to be treated.

Wednesday, 29 March 2017

Free Writing

MY FIRST YEAR IN YEAR 7


On the first day of school 2017 I was worthy of becoming a year 7 student as I walked through the door I thought for a second and said its going to be hard now that I am a year 7 it was much easier when I was a year 6 but now that I am a year 7 I have to try my hardest.


To try my hardest in year 7 I will have to not talk to other people while the teacher is talking and I shall not sit next to anyone that I will talk to and they will talk to me.When I was a year 6 I wasn't listening really well to the teacher so this year in year 7 I will have to try and listen to the teacher.

On the second week of school I really liked to be a year 7 because we do better work then when I was in year 6. The work in year 6 was really boring so now that I am in year 7 I have really have good work.So when I get told to do my work I am really happy because it is good work that my teachers give me.

Through out the term every morning we start at 8:30 because we have our own senior assembly so we can kick our day off and to get our brain working for the day.So when we are having our assembly we do our mihi and the karakia once we are done with our assembly we go to our classes.

My favourite thing in year 7 is going to teach and we do sports when the year 8's go's to teach so that we have something to do when they are gone.And my other favourite thing about being in year 7 is coming to school before 8:30 and then coming in side the senior space and having assembly with all the year 7's and 8's.

I hope you enjoyed reading my story. (please leave a comment on my blog)

Thursday, 23 June 2016

Captain sullenberger

Are you a hero?Wow captain sullenberger is a real life hero he had saved a plane that had 140 people in the plane he is a real life hero lets see more of captain sullenberger.

One sortmy day there was a man called captain sullenberger he had been flying a plane with about 110 people in the plan he is a real life plot he had been flying for like 2 hours.

1 hour late the plane had landed on hudson river captain sullenberger had saved a lot of lifes he had landed prefectly when they were just about to land all the people in the plane where scared but captain sullenberger saved a lot of lifes.

Walt:Use a range of knowledge to show understanding of text.