Angel Writing - Narrative September 2016

Once a upon a time there was a family that went kayaking.It was a celebration for someone in there family who had there anniversary.What she wanted to do for her anniversary  was go kayaking so they went to mission bay.So she thought that the water was nice and  blue that you could she the sand the water was clean you could see the shells though the water.

When they took there kayak’s off there car then went to put it in the water and hopped into the kayak. When they got into the kayak  the felt scared because it was there first time in a kayak.when they went out to sea it wasn’t scary for them when they tried it.when they did that the all had a relay.when mum get’s out of the kayak the have to he into there lane’s  when they did mum said on your marks get set go then they went jack was coming first then caren was coming bill was coming last so the winner was jack.

They were so hot when they got out of there kayak the sun was shining on there face.It was so hot for them when they were in there kayak.so they all got out of there kayak and set on the sand and had lunch when they finsihed there lunch then they rested for 10 or 20 minutes and hopped into the water for a siwm it was so cold when they got in they were playing voley ball and tag under the water then mum came in and played with them it was so fun they were all laughing.

Mum, jack and caren thought when they were kayaking it was fun and they thought that they will go there another day they were so tired when they got out of there kayak and then mum said i am tired to let’s go now me will come another day.