Narrative

Title:Super Vivor

One early morning everyone meet at Ptengland school to decide what there going to do it for one whole day.This is a Competition to see who will win and see who will keep up with the activities If one of them give up then they will be sent home.

The first activity will be based in team 5 block their will be three tables set up for all three of them so every one behind there tables.On the tables are stink toe jam shoes with stink socks in it they have to try and untie the knot’s.Also baby clothes they have to try and clean it with their hands and water.The challenge may begin you’s only have 90 seconds captain america and spider man are struggling to untie the knot’s because the shoe stinks Mum and baby got the shoes untied now there on to cleaning the baby clothes captain america and spider-man are still struggling mum and baby are almost finish now spider man are on to cleaning the clothes mum and baby are finish and times up so that looked like a hard challenge to spider-man and captain america well i thought captain america was going to win but no he couldn’t handle the smell of the shoes well next time.So the winner for the whole show is Mum and baby well Mum and baby did some hard work together they both handled the smell of the shoes and handled clean the baby clothes.

The problem in this story is that spider man and captain america couldn’t handle the smell of the shoes and the socks in it  and Mum and baby could also they were struggling to untie the knot’s but it was hard for them to even try.

Angel Writing - Narrative September 2016

Once a upon a time there was a family that went kayaking.It was a celebration for someone in there family who had there anniversary.What she wanted to do for her anniversary  was go kayaking so they went to mission bay.So she thought that the water was nice and  blue that you could she the sand the water was clean you could see the shells though the water.

When they took there kayak’s off there car then went to put it in the water and hopped into the kayak. When they got into the kayak  the felt scared because it was there first time in a kayak.when they went out to sea it wasn’t scary for them when they tried it.when they did that the all had a relay.when mum get’s out of the kayak the have to he into there lane’s  when they did mum said on your marks get set go then they went jack was coming first then caren was coming bill was coming last so the winner was jack.

They were so hot when they got out of there kayak the sun was shining on there face.It was so hot for them when they were in there kayak.so they all got out of there kayak and set on the sand and had lunch when they finsihed there lunch then they rested for 10 or 20 minutes and hopped into the water for a siwm it was so cold when they got in they were playing voley ball and tag under the water then mum came in and played with them it was so fun they were all laughing.

Mum, jack and caren thought when they were kayaking it was fun and they thought that they will go there another day they were so tired when they got out of there kayak and then mum said i am tired to let’s go now me will come another day.