Inferring though bubbles - The Pink Umbrella

WALT:Make inferences by Put ourselves in a character's shoes.
The past few week's room 1 literacy has been learning about Inferring through bubbles like your putting yourself in other character's shoes.

WALT:use my prior knowledge and information within the text to make connections.
This week my group is reading poems about roald dahl poems.

Kids should get paid to go to school

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Kids should get paid to go to school.

I think kids should get paid to go to school cause its hard.

Point:1

My first reason is why it is hard because we have to sit down on the mat for so long and wait till the teacher is finish talking and when we have to do that our boring teachers say things that are boring and then we get bored so then we get annoyed and then we will start talking to each other and then the teacher will stop doing what they are doing and then tell us what to do because we have been sitting down on the mat to long which when we do get up we are already tired from sitting down on the mat.

Point:2

My second reason Once we get paid to go to school we should be able to buy our lunch so then our parents don’t need to make our lunch and they don’t need to pack it away for us into our bags so sence we get paid we don’t need tob eat because we get paid to go to school.

Point:3

My last reason is why should kids get paid i rekon that they should get paid half the money that the teachers get and i think it is worth it because we are working very hard so thats why i think we shold get paid half the money that the teachers get also when we work hard and we finish our work we should get paid so what do you think???I hope you will agree with me that kids should get paid???

Conculsion:

So there you go I’ve wrote down all my reasons about kids should get paid to go to school I have stated them throw my three points I hope you will agree with me??

                    This weeks WALT:identify features of persuasive writing

            

The Three Kete

Hi this is room 1 literacy we are learning all about the three kete and there are 2 gods there names are tane and whiro. there are lots of villages which Tane has saved. he save the day buy growing his plant to bring the 3 kete to earth but whiro tryed to stop tane from getting the three kete.

My animation

my animation is all about solid,liquid,and gas,

Science Experiment

Walt: understand chemical and physical changes and the science behind washing products.
this week we have been learning how to change things in to clean things.,

Angel Writing - Narrative September 2016

Once a upon a time there was a family that went kayaking.It was a celebration for someone in there family who had there anniversary.What she wanted to do for her anniversary  was go kayaking so they went to mission bay.So she thought that the water was nice and  blue that you could she the sand the water was clean you could see the shells though the water.

When they took there kayak’s off there car then went to put it in the water and hopped into the kayak. When they got into the kayak  the felt scared because it was there first time in a kayak.when they went out to sea it wasn’t scary for them when they tried it.when they did that the all had a relay.when mum get’s out of the kayak the have to he into there lane’s  when they did mum said on your marks get set go then they went jack was coming first then caren was coming bill was coming last so the winner was jack.

They were so hot when they got out of there kayak the sun was shining on there face.It was so hot for them when they were in there kayak.so they all got out of there kayak and set on the sand and had lunch when they finsihed there lunch then they rested for 10 or 20 minutes and hopped into the water for a siwm it was so cold when they got in they were playing voley ball and tag under the water then mum came in and played with them it was so fun they were all laughing.

Mum, jack and caren thought when they were kayaking it was fun and they thought that they will go there another day they were so tired when they got out of there kayak and then mum said i am tired to let’s go now me will come another day.

Model Poster

WALT: work together to deconstruct a narrative text into it's main parts: characters, setting, problem resolution.