Wednesday, 7 June 2017

Kids should get paid to go to school

                      Title:
Kids should get paid to go to school.
I think kids should get paid to go to school cause its hard.

Point:1
My first reason is why it is hard because we have to sit down on the mat for so long and wait till the teacher is finish talking and when we have to do that our boring teachers say things that are boring and then we get bored so then we get annoyed and then we will start talking to each other and then the teacher will stop doing what they are doing and then tell us what to do because we have been sitting down on the mat to long which when we do get up we are already tired from sitting down on the mat.

Point:2
My second reason Once we get paid to go to school we should be able to buy our lunch so then our parents don’t need to make our lunch and they don’t need to pack it away for us into our bags so sence we get paid we don’t need tob eat because we get paid to go to school.

Point:3
My last reason is why should kids get paid i rekon that they should get paid half the money that the teachers get and i think it is worth it because we are working very hard so thats why i think we shold get paid half the money that the teachers get also when we work hard and we finish our work we should get paid so what do you think???I hope you will agree with me that kids should get paid???


Conculsion:

So there you go I’ve wrote down all my reasons about kids should get paid to go to school I have stated them throw my three points I hope you will agree with me??
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